Sneak Peek

When I posted my vision for this year I promised updates on how I'm doing in accomplishing the items on my list.  Since my manuscript is a lot of the reason I haven't had a chance to provide such an update, I thought I would provide a small sample.  Sooooooooo...buy it or burn it??  Please leave comments below.

                                                                                                                                                                 

 “9-1-1, what’s your emergency?”  Despite the silence filling the airwaves, the dispatcher was certain there was someone on the line.  Though arguably the imminent danger had passed, she was still terrified and fearing for her life.  She would have to find her words if she wanted someone to find her – to help her.
“9-1-1, what’s your emergency”, the dispatcher tried once more.  There was an inaudible female response.  “Hello? Caller?”  The dispatcher could hear breathing, but she couldn’t seem to make out the words.  “Caller are you there?  Do you need police, fire or a medic?  Caller?”
“I need a doctor!”  The response was both sudden and frantic, catching both women off guard.  “I need a doctor!”  The request was quickly turning into a scream.  “I need a doctor! I need a doctor!”  She began to rock back and forth beside the bed as she struggled to catch her breath, suddenly unable to stabilize her response.
“Okay ma’am I need you to calm down.  I can dispatch an ambulance out to you but I need to know what’s wrong.”
“I need a doctor!” 
“I understand, sweetheart, but I need you to bear with me, okay.  Are you in danger?  What’s your emergency?  Are you alone?”
Her voice was once more barely above a whisper, but the dispatcher was able to make out, “I was raped”, before the woman’s words faded into what sounded like the inaudible tears of a child.
“Ma’am, please, stay with me.  Is your assailant still present in the home?”
“No,” the dispatcher heard another silence as she typed away at her routing board. “He…she’s gone.”




He burst through the door with the air of a man drenched in frantic and fury.  Charging the nurses’ station like an angry bull, someone had better have answers.  None of the nurses present at the desk paid any particular attention to the stranger standing before them.  He opened the floor by blurting out the announcement of his presence to the backs of their heads as if responding to an open invitation.  “I’m Kite Spalding; I was told my wife was brought here.”  None of the women turned around.  They continued about the business of the evening, refusing to acknowledge his presence.  No one even flinched.  They continued as if no words had been spoken.  His anger grew exponentially and it took him every ounce of restraint he possessed to contain himself.  “Excuse me!”  His voice was now far more urgent and bordering on violently aggressive.  The urgency with which he spoke demanded the attention of anyone within yards of his presence. 
He’d finally gotten someone’s attention.  A nurse, small in stature, but big on attitude, turned quickly to face him. “Excuse me!  Can I help you?” She met his gaze head on, shoulders square and hands rested upon the nurses’ desk.   Though her face remained straight, her attitude dripped the existence of an unseen neck roll.  Mr. Spalding responded with as much attitude as he was given.  
“Yes! And you can start by scrapping the attitude and telling me where the hell you’re holding my wife!”
Trading attitude for attitude, the nurse moved forward with the battle rolling her eyes as she picked up the phone.  “You know”, she began with a deeply menacing smile, “where I can see how you might think that a good place to start, I’ve got a better one.”  She held up a finger and then turned her back, forcing Kite to await her return to the conversation. She stood up a bit more straight as someone picked up the line. “Yes, Security, we have a situation at the nurses’ station.”
Kite was livid.  “You have a what!??!”  He lunged at the nurses' back, making clear that his attitude was turning into rage, but before the incident could run its course, a delicate finger attached to a white lab coat hung up the phone.  Gently commandeering the receiver the elder woman quickly took control of the environment.
“Nurse Bridges, I can take it from here.  Please page Dr. Harborough to Exam Room 4.”
The young nurses’ attitude changed instantly for fear of reprimand and reproach.  She became a completely different person in the blink of an eye, at once humble and willing to provide assistance. “Yes doctor.”  Picking up the receiver once more, she turned slightly from the doctor and patients’ gaze, bowing out gracefully.

The doctor with her slightly sedate tone and comforting demeanor turned her full attention to the man standing before the front desk as if she knew instinctively what would come next.  Placing her hand close to his arm, she asked in a very matronly fashion, “How can I help your sir?”




 A plainly attractive, middle-aged white man poked his head in just as Kite took note of the disturbed expression painted across his face and the fact that he wasn’t dressed like a doctor.
“Dr. Harborough.”
“Miranda, a moment please?”
“Yes,” she turned her attentions back to Mr. Spalding.  “Mr. Spalding, if you could give us just a moment?”
“Sure.  Absolutely.”
“Thank you sir.” The doctor flashed a very uncomfortable smile before leaving the office and closing the door behind her.  In the hallway, certain that they were out of earshot, Ellis Harborough quickly voiced his frustrations. “What the hell Miranda?  I thought you handled the nut cases!  What’d you call me in for?”
“First of all”, Dr. Perriman chimed in, clearly taking offense.  “My patients are not nut cases.  They are simply wandering souls who have lost their hold on mental health… momentarily,” she added.  “Secondly, I think there may be more to this case than just that.  You’re an expert in criminology; I need some help getting to the bottom of this thing.”
“Yes, well call me crazy, but isn’t that what all these Albany PD detectives are for?”
“Not exactly, they are here to investigate the possibility of sexual assault, but I think there’s more to it than that.”
“What’s going on?  What haven’t I been told about this case?”  Miranda led Ellis further from her office door to address her concerns with the case. “Ellis, this woman swears to the most high God that she was raped, and where there is evidence of intercourse, she says that she was raped by a woman.”
“A what!?”  If he had any doubt that Miranda’s patients were crazy before, she’d cleared that right up.

She fanned her hands quickly before him.  “Keep your voice down!  A woman Ellis, and not just that, but Dr. Steven’s notes  that the initial examination shows obvious evidence of childbirth where the patient has made no mention of children.  The police found no evidence of a child in the home and the husband denies that they have ever had children.”
“Maybe the kid was from a previous marriage.  Could be that she just doesn’t want him to know.  You’ve seen the age difference between them; this is clearly not her first time around the block.”
“That may be true, but everyone who has ever ‘been around the block’ most often remembers the trip, and according to this patient, Innocence Spalding is a woman who has never bore any children.  Ellis, I need your help on this one.”
Ellis never could resist those puppy dog eyes and she had him right where she wanted him. She knew that he would do whatever he could to make her happy. “Okay, I’ll see what I can dig up.”
“Thank you,” she offered with the shy gaze of a schoolgirl.
“Dr. Perriman?”  Looking over Ellis’s shoulder as best she could, given his stature, Miranda could see Kite quickly advancing toward them.  “Can I see my wife now?”
“I can’t honestly say Mr. Spalding, but why don’t we go find out?  Follow me.”  Before the door opened to Exam Room 4 Kite remembered Dr. Perriman’s request to the nurse with the attitude.  This caused him to wonder exactly what had just taken place in the hallway without him.  It was obvious that the doctor he found her speaking with was the individual she paged to Innie’s room.
As the door opened slowly, Kite could hear his wife’s voice long before he could see her face. She sounded frantic and alone.  “I am telling you, I know what I felt and he had breasts! Why don’t you people believe me!?!”
“Mrs. Spalding, it’s not that we don’t believe you, but please, do try to understand our position.”
Her eyes quickly searching the room in obvious horror, they found no rest amongst the flurry of strange faces. That is until she witnessed her husband advancing through the crowd of detectives and hospital personnel.

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